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I think I will test out this critique thing. I have been interested in terraspace ever since I came to DA, and I always try to do better at with with every piece.
This was thrown together in the last couple of days. I have been working on a bigger project off an on for a couple of months now, I thought it would be the next thing I submitted, but this actually came together quickly and nicely. I am definitely open for name suggestions. I swear, deciding the name takes longer than the art itself. Mojoworld and Photoshop Full view recommended. Comments
 Very cool image. I like the fiery pits down below. Nice creation!
 this is beautiful!!
-- Friendship is a union of spirits, a marriage of hearts, and the bond there of virtue.  Very nice!
   Beautiful! Sort of reminds me of the photos of Saturn NASA released today.
-- -Apophysis- -Digital Tweakers- -Chaoscopers- -Ultra Fractal-  That is awesome coming from MojoWorld...Nice job...
I like mojoworld. it has potential. the community and developers seem to be totally dead though. oh well, vue 7 is a bit more useful.
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Critiques
I always feel bad giving out critiques of others' work, but here goes...
I think if I were to nitpick this piece, I would focus mainly on a couple elements of the sky. The colors and the planet look really good, and like the concept of the clouds and the comets. The clouds, however, look a little bit "embossed" almost, upon closer inspection. The darks almost look too dark, and the whites too white. The comets look really cool, and the ONLY reason I would critique them at all is because I can spot the Lens Flare from Photoshop on the closest comet. While that's not necessarily a bad thing, these types of things always jump out at me so I thought I'd point it out.
But other than those two small things - I really like it. I really like where the comet meets the bright horizon line, and I also like the fiery pits (as one of your commenters noted).
Nicely done!
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